Rewrite the paragraph so that all subjects and verbs agree. The APE agrees to fund a fall excursion. The seventh grade class votes on the destination. Some vote for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. (2 points)
Review the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.
Everyone is excited for the cheering rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of inflating the balloons, her least favorite task. They hate how balloons have to be completely full or they won’t float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheering routine. If she doesn’t practice, you might embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the cheering rally will be a success. (2 points)
The relative pronoun “which” is used with an essential clause and the relative pronoun “which” is used with a non-essential clause. In three to five sentences, explain when to use each pronoun and the difference between the two relative clauses. (2 points)
Rewrite the following paragraph, replacing commas with semicolons where needed.
This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will open downtown. The deli will be offering free tastings of its most popular sandwiches on Friday May 10, Saturday May 11 and Sunday May 12. Samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, a roasted vegetable and hummus wrap, the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll, and the famous BLT, made with bacon, lettuce and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations, including Boston, Massachusetts, Brooklyn, New York and Portland, Maine. (2 points) Please help me. I tried to do this for 3 days, my mom won’t go through it with me. And the sentences are the only thing I’m stuck on. I need to get my language level quickly. Before it becomes and F. Here is the second one. everything is fixed
Everyone is excited for the cheering rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of inflating the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how balloons have to be completely full or they won’t float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheering routine. if she doesn’t practice, she might embarrass herself. The last to arrive were Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the cheering rally will be a success. This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will open downtown. The deli will be offering free tastings of its most popular sandwiches on Friday, May 10; Saturday May 1; and Sunday May 12. Samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, roasted vegetable and hummus wrap; the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll; and the famous BLT, made with bacon, lettuce and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations, including Boston, Massachusetts; Brooklyn, New York; and Portland, Maine.
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Corrected! Do you see the corrections I made? Do you understand them? The PTA has agreed to fund a fall excursion. The seventh grade class votes on the destination. Some vote for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. Corrected. I already tried it was wrong. Most of this is correct. Errors are in bold.
Everyone is excited for the cheering rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of inflating the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how balloons have to be completely full or
this
will not float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheering routine. if she doesn’t practice, she might embarrass herself. The last arrived
has been
Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does
their
party, the cheering rally will be a success. That’s what I wrote. It is therefore a clause which generally modifies a noun or a noun phrase and which is often introduced by a relative pronoun. Like the words who, that, who, whose, whose. who, who, that* refers to the human. which, that ** refers to something that is not human, And of which is Possessive. A non-essential clause is When a sentence has a non-essential adjective clause, the clause is separated by commas. Consider each sentence separately. (Seeing all the sentences in paragraph form can be overwhelming.)
Here’s how:
The APE agrees to fund a fall excursion.
The seventh grade class votes on the destination.
Some vote for the zoo, others vote for the museum.
After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner.
In each sentence, identify the subject. Indicate whether it is singular or plural.
Then locate the verb in each sentence. If the subject is singular, is its verb singular? If not, fix it.
If the subject is plural, is its verb plural? If not, fix it. Everyone is excited for the cheering rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of inflating the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how balloons have to be completely full or they won’t float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheering routine. if she doesn’t practice, she might embarrass herself. The last to arrive were Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the cheering rally will be a success. Everyone is excited for the cheering rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of inflating the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how balloons have to be completely full or they won’t float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheering routine. if she doesn’t practice, she might embarrass herself. The last to arrive were Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone joins in, the cheering rally will be a success. I changed their to There.
<~~No. What word "their" is he trying to refer to?
It is to them
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The word “everyone” can be misleading. Even though it refers to many people, the word is singular – as you can tell by “one” in it.
The sentence should read: As long as everyone does it
him or her
right side, the cheering rally will be a success. ok well that helps. wait so they all have the right word in it? Maybe. But what word “their” does it refer to (incorrectly). I THINK I HAVE UNDERSTOOD it’s corrected The relative pronoun “that” is used with an essential clause and the relative pronoun “which” is used with a non-essential clause. In three to five sentences, explain when to use each pronoun and the difference between the two relative clauses. (2 points) thank you 65xDares You wrote:
The PTA has agreed to fund a fall excursion.
Ok, you put the verb here in the past tense, and that’s correct
IF
all other sentences also have past tense verbs. Do they? is it for all or just the one you explained? I changed their to There.
It’s up to them and
had to be Their refers to all the people there. I don’t know but I will change it. As long as everyone does the right thing, the cheering rally will be a success. Alright that’s her then As long as everyone does their part, the cheering rally will be a success. good. Are the semicolons always for the 3rd sentence or the second? are you still there writer? So I did the 3rd on my own, my mum said she would check but I need help with the last one.
Rewrite the following paragraph, replacing commas with semicolons where needed.
This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will open downtown. The deli will be offering free tastings of its most popular sandwiches on Friday May 10, Saturday May 11 and Sunday May 12. Samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, a roasted vegetable and hummus wrap, the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll, and the famous BLT, made with bacon, lettuce and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations, including Boston, Massachusetts, Brooklyn, New York and Portland, Maine. Anyway, I’m done. I’m finished. I will ask my mother to help me with the rest. Yes, thank you And the very last. hello it’s been an hour. are you still there Writeacher? I love the teachers, thank you The PTA has agreed to fund a field trip in the fall. The seventh grade class votes on the destination. Some vote for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. is it well written? Uno I think it’s true Can someone solve this problem for me?
I like to take my dogs to the park. I make sure to bring fresh water, their leashes, and extra treats every time we go. My dogs are much bigger than most dogs so I have to make sure the park isn’t too crowded when we go. My dogs get really excited when they see other dogs and they bark so loud. Sometimes people get worried when they hear my dogs barking, but they’re really friendly and just want to play. After a long walk to the park, my dogs usually sleep for an hour. Not all of them, no. The first concerns subject-verb agreement. You must carefully read the instructions for each paragraph.
Review the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.
These are the indications for the second. “Correct pronoun agreement” means that if you use a pronoun to refer to a noun in this sentence or paragraph, then the pronoun must “match” the noun: singular or plural? etc
Carefully read the instructions for others. YAY THE PROFESSOR HELPED TYSM insta: @uppercazek._ <<<
insta: @justandstillk <<< Now… study these for the uses of commas and semicolons: and
Then post your rewritten paragraph and I’ll check it. No one is going to do all that rewriting for you, but if you post what you write, someone here might check your work for you.